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febyac's avatar

i'm invested

Sage Wise's avatar

Whenever an author is able to get a reader to "scroll up" and re-read a phrase in an earlier section, it is a win in my book !

Thought the linking of the two instances of "slipping beneath clean sheets" was done very gracefully. Kudos to you.

Nick Hills's avatar

"I had come all this way to Central Park just to sit on a big rock overlooking tall buildings and talk to a boy about Jeeps and New York City housing"

I love this line, great piece! Have a nice day!